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BASHMAN's Sketches
- CharlieBananas
- Supporting Character
- Posts: 12
- Joined: Wed May 12, 2010 11:00 pm
- AslanC
- Zenith Comics
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- Joined: Sat Apr 03, 2010 11:00 pm
- Location: Soviet Canuckistan
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- AslanC
- Zenith Comics
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- Joined: Sat Apr 03, 2010 11:00 pm
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- Lindharin
- Paragon
- Posts: 612
- Joined: Sun Apr 04, 2010 11:00 pm
- Location: New York
The shadow is cool, but very stark. Depending on if that is the intent or not, maybe it could be a little less "dense", for lack of a better word. Add a touch of transparency (although that may just grey it out) or blur the edges just a tiny bit. Not sure... Or maybe it is the contrast with the white background, and putting a brick wall or something as the background might help.
The nice thing about the shadow is that it is more evocative. In either case he's turning to fight something behind him. But the shadow implies there is a bright light coming from low and behind, which immediately makes me think he's walked into a trap, and they (cops? goons?) just turned on spot lights.
In either case, nice job!
The nice thing about the shadow is that it is more evocative. In either case he's turning to fight something behind him. But the shadow implies there is a bright light coming from low and behind, which immediately makes me think he's walked into a trap, and they (cops? goons?) just turned on spot lights.
In either case, nice job!
- CharlieBananas
- Supporting Character
- Posts: 12
- Joined: Wed May 12, 2010 11:00 pm