My first Built Character - Please Critique!!!

Gobbo · Post by **Gobbo** » Sun Feb 06, 2011 12:02 am

Roach [AKA Jason Nelson]

Brawn 2
Agility 3
Mind 1

Powers
Armor 2 [living roach armor]
Clinging 1
* Mastery 3 [Roaches Only; Range 1 mile only]
Conjuring 4 [Items made of living roaches]
Mind Shield 1
Danger Sense

Weakness
Damaging Weakness [Poison Attacks]

Skills
Athletics - Running
Escapology - Contortion
Stealth - Hiding
Streetwise - Shortcuts

Advantages
Versatile
Instant Change

Disadvantage
Age [17]
Social Stigma

Mental Malfunction
Roach is always in mental communication with thousands of * minds. He is twitchy and reacts as a roach to most situations

AslanC · Post by **AslanC** » Sun Feb 06, 2011 9:48 am

Other than the concept creeping me the * out, he sounds great

Post by **BASHMAN** » Sun Feb 06, 2011 12:50 pm

Very cool. Why super running though?

There are a few powers that I always associate with roaches:

Immunity (to a lot of stuff)
and Danger Sense (it's the antenae)

But if your guy doesn't have "roach powers" and instead just controls roaches, those don't need to be powers for him.

Recommended Advantage: Versatile, since this power seems very flexible in its use. For instance, if he were to make a shield out of roaches to block incoming attacks, or make a "cage" out of roaches to trap an enemy. these would use Deflect or Force Field respectively.

Gobbo · Post by **Gobbo** » Sun Feb 06, 2011 12:54 pm

Versatile is a good one I missed! I will make a quick tweek...

AngryGhost · Post by **AngryGhost** » Sat Feb 19, 2011 1:29 pm

BASHMAN wrote:Very cool. Why super running though?

was super running removed or is it that Agility is at 3 and he's taken Athletics Running as skills? (3 being superhuman agility)

Gobbo · Post by **Gobbo** » Sun Feb 20, 2011 1:03 am

It was removed.